DEATH IS EASY
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FREEDOM, As If
It Mattered
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(N.B. -- The formatting here is sometimes not precisely accurate, e.g., the dialogue should be left-justified. My translation program is imperfect.)

 

THE GREATEST GOOD

by

Russell Madden

 

 



FADE IN:

 

1. INT. HOUSE, DINING ROOM -- DAY

DEREK HENDERSEN, 45, a moderately successful businessman, sits at a cluttered dining room table. A golden shaft of early afternoon summer sunshine baths the scene in its peaceful light. A Vivaldi concerto drifts through the air on this lazy Saturday. Sipping at a glass of iced tea, Derek peruses the day's mail.

Across the table from Derek sits his wife, MARLENE, early-forties, attractive in her own quiet way. Yawning, she flips through a clothing catalog. A half-consumed dish of melting chocolate ice cream rests atop other catalogs.

Abruptly, Derek freezes. His dark brown eyes widen as he focuses on the return address of the business envelope clutched in his right hand.

As seconds flow slowly by, stretching into a viscous eternity, Derek's knuckles whiten. His trembling fingers threaten to betray his mounting agitation.

Quickly and surreptitiously, he glances at Marlene. She is oblivious to his distress as she hums softly in time with the music.

Blinking away isolated beads of sweat dripping into his eyes, Derek swallows. Casually, he places the rest of the mail on the table and lowers the suspect envelope to his lap.

With a quiet urgency, Derek digs a fingertip under the envelope's flap and saws it open. The ragged ripping of the paper sounds as loud to his suddenly sensitized senses as the thunder of Judgment Day. The jagged edges of paper mask a single, white sheet of paper nestled inside.

He pauses, closes his eyes for a moment, then nonchalantly extracts the neatly folded paper. Stealing another sip of tea, he sets the empty envelope atop the already processed pile of bills and solicitations that forms the bulk of his daily mail. With a snap of his wrist, he shakes open the sheet. Before reading it, he again checks on his wife. As she focuses on her catalog, her serene gray eyes hold no hint she has detected anything awry.

With a look of horrified fascination, Derek lowers his gaze to the sheet with its official seal emblazoned at the top.

The Draft Commission seal stares up at him in red, white, and blue.

Squinting ever-so-slightly, Derek begins to read.

Greetings Citizen Derek Hendersen, the letter begins.

As he reads past the salutation, an involuntary gasp escapes Derek. His sweat-sheened face reddens as he clamps his fingers into the casual shirt covering his chest. With pain ratcheting through his torso, his face contorts in a combination of agony and terror. Unable to control himself, he slumps in his chair as he attempts to suck in a lungful of air.

With frantic concern marring her features, Marlene tosses aside the the catalog and scrambles around the edge of the antique table.

MARLENE
(panic ratcheting in her voice)
Derek! What's wrong?

As he slides bonelessly to the floor, Derek hears his wife's voice fading away in echoing remoteness. The forgotten announcement from his local Draft Board flutters from his nerveless fingers and seesaws to the floor like a dying leaf of autumn.

In clean, crisp print, the message contained on the paper is only too evident as he rests face-up on the polished wood of the floor:

In the name of the Greatest Good for the Greatest Number, you, Citizen Derek Randolph Hendersen, shall please report to Draft Commission Office #1026 on Wednesday, the Fifteenth Day of July, for induction into the Donor Corps.

 

2. INT. HOSPITAL ROOM -- NIGHT

The quiet stillness of a hospital room presses in on Derek at age fifteen like a smothering blanket of foreboding. His mother, HELEN, late thirties, lies in her rumpled bed. A single overhead light captures her in its oval halo like a heavenly spotlight. The rest of the room huddles in shadows. Barely visible there are Derek's sisters, 8 and 10.

Reluctantly, DEREK glances over at his father, MR. ISAAC HENDERSEN, 40. The elder Hendersen's lined features harden into a glare at his son's questioning look. Thinning his lips, Derek's father nods towards his wife.

Woodenly, Derek approaches the side of the bed. Wincing slightly, he takes his mother's emaciated, almost skeletal hand and holds it limply in his own.

His father's recent words reverberate in his head.

 

3. INT. HOSPITAL WAITING ROOM -- NIGHT

Derek stares at the cracked linoleum floor as his father looms over him. His TWO SISTERS, 8 and 10, sit quietly on plastic chairs to one side, studiously ignoring the confrontation occurring in front of them.

MR. HENDERSEN
(sternly, harshly)
I don't give a flying hell what you want.
She wants to see you before she dies.

His father's piercing gaze holds a warning Derek knows he cannot resist.

MR. HENDERSEN (cont'd.)
You're going in there, and you're going
to smile and touch her and be as pleasant and
caring as you possibly can be or, by all
that's holy, you will live to regret it.

Frowning, Derek nods his assent and follows his father as the older man grabs his forearm and drags him along like a recalcitrant puppy.

His father's hollow, sleep-deprived yet boldly determined eyes brook no dissent.

Wordlessly, his sisters rise from their chairs and follow timidly behind.

 

4. INT. HOSPITAL ROOM -- NIGHT

Loosely, Derek continues holding his mother's feeble hand. Like some celestial being, she lays shrouded in a sparkling white sheet. In a hamper to one side, a corner of a blood-and-vomit stained sheet peeks from beneath its plastic lid.

With only flickering awareness, his mother's lidded eyes focus on her eldest child and only son. The faint rise and fall of her diminutive chest alone marks her as existing yet on this side of that eternal, one-way barrier Derek has no desire to cross.

Gratefully, Derek glances away as the door whispers open. A young internist, DR. SHERYL BANYON, 26, glides into the room as eerily as the ghost his mother will soon become. Her thin, pale features and straggly blond hair repulse Derek as she squeezes his shoulder. Her empty smile hides secrets Derek does not care to learn.

Extending bony fingers, Dr. Banyon solemnly shakes the hand of Derek's father.

DR. BANYON
(hushed tones)
I'm sorry we can't do more for Helen,
Mr. Hendersen. But, of course, as you're
well aware, we're desperately short of
organs available for transplant. Even
though the Virus attacks only one percent of the population,
that translates into nearly three million victims each year.
(glances sorrowfully at Helen)
That's an unfathomably large number of
patients compared to the supply of organs
that comes on line.

Dr. Banyon lowers her voice slightly, steps away from Derek, and returns her attention to Mr. Henderson.

DR. BANYON (cont'd.)
Unfortunately, Helen contracted an
unusually virulent form. Her kidneys and
liver have already failed. I'm afraid her
heart is not far behind.

Mr. Hendersen's jaw bunches. For a moment, he gazes upon a vision only he can see.

Abruptly, he nods curtly.

MR. HENDERSEN
(firmly)
I understand, Doctor. You've done all you
can. I'm just grateful she can die with
dignity here in the hospital.

Dr. Banyon surveys the rather frayed accommodations and sighs.

DR. BANYON
I know. In the larger cities, Virus
patients are sent home during the final
stages. There simply aren't enough beds for them all.

Her narrow lips thin even more.

DR. BANYON (cont'd.)
(resignedly, regretfully)
I'm not sure how much longer we can afford
to maintain our present policy here.

With a sidelong glance, Derek sees his father's spine straighten almost imperceptibly.

MR. HENDERSEN
(with simple determination)
Perhaps we can do something to change that.
 
DR. BANYON
(distractedly)
Yes, I hope so.

Dr. Banyon glances at her watch and flashes an artificially apologetic smile at Derek and his father.

DR. BANYON (cont'd.)
(briskly)
I'm afraid I must be going.
(pauses at doorway)
I share your pain.

As the doctor exits, Mr. Hendersen nods absently.

A chill slithers through Derek as he studies his father's thoughtful, preoccupied expression.

With subconscious awareness, Derek turns towards his mother. Her eyes have closed. The cool hand he holds in his sweaty palm has grown colder still. It offers no resistance when he squeezes.

An involuntary revulsion causes him to jerk his hand free. As he does, his mother's arm flops lifelessly to the bed.

The muffled sobs of his younger sisters flank him as they come forward and kneel at the edge of the bed.

Tears never mar his father's flinty eyes.

 

5. INT. HEARING ROOM, WASHINGTON, D.C.-- DAY

The room is crowded with cameras, reporters, and lookers-on. Two tiers of tables and seats at one end of the room, the focus of all the attention, rise above the melee. Distinguished looking men and women sit there surrounded by aides and advisers as they gaze across the gathered throng of potential voters.

Glancing at his colleagues for confirmation of their readiness to begin, SENATOR IRWIN RUMHART, grips a large gavel and raps twice, hard, on the table top before him.

As the crowd quickly quiets, Rumhart automatically touches his lapel microphone to life.

RUMHART
This session of the Select Committee on
Virus Response is now in order.
(nods to either side)
Ladies. Gentlemen. I thank you for your
attendance and attention to this, the
greatest threat to face our society in the
past century.

A murmur ripples through the faceless crowd.

RUMHART (cont'd.)
When the first hearings convened here in
Washington on how to handle the Virus
crisis, we faced a critical shortage of the
donor organs needed to combat it. This
grave situation has not changed.
(pauses dramatically)
But that dire reality will, I believe, soon
recede into a dim, distant nightmare of the past.

The audience erupts into a loud buzz of anticipation and questions at this assertion. Rumhart does not interrupt the excitement. As he lets it play itself out, he covers a faint smile with a cupped hand.

RUMHART (cont'd.)
We have before us today a man with a
vision. Isaac Hendersen is a simple man, a
common man with an uncommon compassion for
the unfortunate among us. I have listened
to his inspiring message, a message of
simple hope and wonderful self-sacrifice.
 
Once you, too, hear his honest, determined
words, I hope you will support my efforts
in bringing his bold plan to reality.
(nods to Isaac Hendersen)
Mr. Hendersen, if you would...?
 
MR. HENDERSEN
Thank you, Senator.
(gazes into cameras)
My message is a simple one. For nearly a
century, our great country has constantly
and consistently moved from the atomistic
selfishness of its beginnings. With hard
work, we have achieved a consensus on the
fact that each of us is dependent upon and
responsible for our fellow citizens. With
this latest and most dire threat to the
lives of those who comprise our community,
we face our greatest challenge. We must
quickly and forcefully fully implement the
unquestionable moral principle that we --
as a society -- must work to obtain the
greatest good for the greatest number.
 
In the past, we have shared the wealth of
those more fortunate in life's lottery with
those less favored. We have, in times of
national crisis, drafted our young men
into combat, placing their lives on the
line for the good of their families and
friends and neighbors. We recognized the
duty each of us has to society by
implementing mandatory harvesting of the
organs of the deceased. This august body
recently required that those with two
healthy identical organs, such as kidneys,
must be prepared to surrender one to those
more needy than they.
 
Our organs are not ours to own or sell as
mere pieces of property. We cannot
selfishly hoard what we already owe to
others. We must take this policy to the
next logical level. By doing so we will
affirm the solidarity each of us faces in
struggling against the myriad forces
separating us.
(pauses)
We must institute a new Draft to establish
a Donor Corps of selfless individuals ready
and able to rescue us all. We must randomly
and fairly distribute the burden and the
solution to the dangers of the Virus. Those
heroes among us who surrender
their organs so that many more will be able
to live shall be honored for their
sacrifices. We are all in this together.
The greatest good for the greatest number.
That principle must be our creed. That is
the shining star which must illuminate our
ath into a new and brighter future. We can
do no less for those unfortunates suffering
among us. Thank you.

Senator Rumhart gauges the audience's reaction. Rather than the pandemonium he expected, silence greets him. Stunned -- perhaps even shocked -- silence, but silence, nonetheless.

He smiles and reaches for the microphone.

 

6. INT. VARIOUS LIVING ROOMS -- NIGHT

Various families watch television reports on the passage of new Draft legislation. The adults in each family glance nervously at each other, but no one dares voice his opposition.

 

7. INT. HENDERSEN DINING ROOM -- NIGHT

Marlene eases her husband to the floor. Quickly -- not quite frantically -- she unbuttons Derek's shirt. Fear and confusion wash across her face as she tries to decide what to do. Sweat drenches Derek's face and clothes. His breath comes in short gasps.

Suddenly reaching a decision, Marlene reaches for the phone.

DEREK
(struggling for breath)
Don't...! No ambulance. No doctor. Please.

Reluctantly Marlene lowers the handset.

Derek forces a smile he does not feel and waves her closer.

DEREK (cont'd.)
Help me...to the couch.
(wincing, he sucks in more air)
Be okay...in a minute.

Struggling, Marlene half-drags, half-guides Derek to the aging brown cushions of an old couch in the family room. Minutes pass. Derek's color gradually returns to normal.

With an arm flung across his face, he watches Marlene retrieve the dropped letter. The slight stagger in her step tells him his wife grasps the seriousness of his -- their -- situation as readily as did he.

Sitting precariously on the edge of the sagging cushions, Marlene dangles the refolded announcement between her index finger and thumb as though it held the Virus itself embedded in its threads.

MARLENE
Is there anything we can do?

Derek does not respond to what could only be a rhetorical question.

DEREK
What can we do? I've never heard of an
appeal succeeding for anything other than
medical reasons.
(smiles unconvincingly)
Too bad that was a panic attack and not a
real heart attack. I might have a chance then.
 
MARLENE
(doesn't seem to have heard him)
Less than a month before you report. Sixty
days after that before you're...pr-processed.
(chokes on the word; begins to babble)
I don't know how to run your business.
What'll the children do? I wish we'd taken
out a larger donor insurance policy. It'll
barely cover the mortgage. How can I go on without you?

With a sick pang seeping into his chest where the pain had so recently dwelled, Derek lets his wife of twenty-five years ramble on. Each of them must deal with the tragedy in his own way. Only a barely noticeable moistness glistens in his eye.

 

8. INT. HENDERSEN DINING ROOM -- NIGHT

A pall hangs over the dinner table as the family eats. Despite the furtive, questioning glances of their two teenage sons, ANDERS, 15, and CHAD, 10, and their grade-school age daughter, ERIN, 7, neither parent feels much like talking.

 

9. EXT. CUBE FACTORY -- DAY

A thirty-year-old Derek stands outside an abandoned cube factory. (Computer storage is now done in three-dimensional cubes rather than hard drives or CD-ROMs.)

STAN NEWSON, 45, a local realtor stands with Derek as they inspect the property.

NEWSON
You're a shrewd businessman, Mr. Hendersen.
A lot of folks would have paid considerably
more to obtain this place.

A calculated yet appreciative smile wreathes Newson's broad face.

NEWSON (cont'd.)
I read that cube storage will revolutionize
the computer world.
(rubs his double-chin)
Beats me, though, how they can cram so much
information into such a small space. Sure
makes CD's look primitive.

Only half paying attention, Derek nods.

DEREK
Three-dimensional storage is here to stay.
We're still magnitudes below the capacity
of the human brain, however. Maybe someday. Someday...

Newson arches a bushy brow and grunts skeptically.

NEWSON
Think so, huh?

His green eyes narrow shrewdly as he examines the derelict factory in light of this new information. An angry, jealous scowl flashes across his features. It disappears, though, before Derek notices.

DEREK
The only reason they sold it to me and not
someone else is because I offered cash.
Took all the money from my father's life
insurance policy, though. And then some.
 
NEWSON
(trying to hide his discomfort)
Right. Your father. Isaac.

Shaking himself from his reverie, Derek glances at his watch.

DEREK
The closing is in an hour. My lawyer said
he'd meet us at the bank thirty minutes
before closing. Shall we go?
 
NEWSON
(lost in thought)
Huh? Oh. Oh, yeah. Sure...

The two men head for the realtor's luxury car parked in the sheltering shade of a tall maple tree.

Derek pauses with the door open and smiles across the roof at the realtor.

DEREK
I was so tired of working for those idiots
at Nutech. Finally, I'll have some
independence. Marlene was a bit nervous at first, but...
(shrugs)
At thirty, I'm finally past Draft age.
Finally, we can breathe a bit more freely.
Nice to be able to make some long-range plans.
 
NEWSON
Too bad about the younger folks, of course.
The Virus shows no signs of abating.
(winks)
Better for one person to die, though, so
five or ten or even more can live. At
least, that's what they say.
(laughs)

Derek offers a weak smile but otherwise is at a loss how to reply.

 

10. INT. KITCHEN -- DAY

Derek's oldest boy, Anders, enters the kitchen. The new Draftee swallows a mouthful of orange juice and carefully places the short glass next to the plate of untouched scrambled eggs and toast Marlene had prepared for him.

DEREK
(quietly)
Good morning.

Anders glances briefly in his father's direction.

ANDERS
(mumbles)
Morning.

Heading across the room, he flings open the refrigerator door and buries his face behind its concealing white enamel. Seconds tick uncomfortably into the past.

When the door finally slams shut, Anders emerges holding a large slice of cold pizza in his teeth and a can of cola in one hand. Popping open the flag-colored cylinder, he takes a bite from his impromptu breakfast and heads for the outside door.

ANDERS (cont'd.)
(mouth full of pizza)
Gotta catch the bus.

His eyes dart from direct contact with the man who had helped conceive him a lifetime ago.

As the door rattles shut, Derek tightens his grip on the half-empty juice glass. His mouth thins to a hard line.

MARLENE (O.S.)
You really should eat.

Derek stiffens at the unexpected presence of his wife. He glances over his right shoulder then stares ahead.

Only when Marlene digs her strong fingers into the hardened planes of his shoulders does he allow his posture to sag.

DEREK
(wearily)
I'm not hungry.
 
MARLENE
Losing weight won't help. They'll just --

Shaking off Marlene's hands, Derek bolts upright and strides four paces away.

DEREK
(shouting)
Don't you think I know that, damn it? The
last thing I need is you nagging at me.

Marlene's eyes glistens as she bites down on her lower lip.

Hesitantly, she extends a hand. Derek half turns, anger flushing his face.

Listlessly, Marlene lets her arm drop.

MARLENE
I'm sorry. I didn't mean to... I didn't
mean it like that. I just worry about you.
 
DEREK
(bitterly, sarcastically)
Well, you won't have to worry much longer.

At sight of his wife's crumpling face, Derek instantly regrets his words. Marlene's shaking shoulders and barely contained sobs tear at his outrage, shredding it into tatters that vanish in the wind of the immediate moment.

Awkwardly, he steps forward.

DEREK (cont'd.)
I'm...I'm sorry.

Uncertainly, he extends his arms.

Rushing forward, Marlene melts into his embrace, her tears flowing more openly as he tightens his arms protectively around her.

DEREK (cont'd.)
It's hard for all of us. I know that. It
still hurts, though.

Stroking Marlene's hair with one hand, he looks out the window to where his son stands on the curb waiting for the school bus. Anders's narrow shoulders reveal the wire-taut tension digging into them all.

DEREK (cont'd.)
What can we say, what can we do that will
change anything? Maybe we should just
accept it. I mean, people die in accidents
all the time. At least we have some
warning, some time to prepare.

Marlene sobs into his chest.

MARLENE
Oh, Derek...
 
DEREK
(as though trying to convince himself)
There are all those others whose lives I'll
save. They say the sacrifice is worth all
this. I'm just a single individual. How
can I refuse when duty called? What else can I do?

As Marlene continues crying, she has no answer for his questions.

 

11. INT. KITCHEN -- NIGHT

A younger Derek and his brother-in-law, TOM PENDLETON, 23, sit at the kitchen table. The scraggly remains of a turkey rest in a pan on the counter. Each man holds a shot glass of amber fluid. A half-empty bottle of Irish whiskey stands like a lone sentinel between them. It is obvious from their bleary eyes that they have been at this for quite awhile.

TOM
(sneering)
"The greatest good for the greatest
number." Just what the hell does that mean,
anyway? What could it possibly mean?

Frowning, Tom swallowed a big gulp of whiskey.

Despite his heavy lids, Derek pulls back his lips in disgust.

DEREK
We've been through this before, Tom. What's
the point in rehashing it? Just because
you're Marlene's brother doesn't mean I
have to put up with your stupidity.

Tom knocks back the rest of the whiskey in his glass, grimaces, and reaches for the bottle. He laughs humorously as he pours himself another drink.

TOM
Guess I should have brought two bottles...
(sips)
It's important to understand just what
we're up against. It's the only way we'll
be able to win.

Derek blinks then yawns.

DEREK
"We"?

Tom waves that aside.

TOM
Just answer my question. What does "the
greatest good" mean?

Derek's brow furrows.

DEREK
You're just a damned college student. And
single, at that. What the hell do you know
about surviving in the real world? You know
nothing about the demands and
responsibilities involved in being a
husband and a father. I just want to reach
my thirtieth birthday. Then I'll kiss
Nutech good-by and strike out on my own.
It's a waste of time to worry about dreamy-
eyed visions like yours.
 
TOM
Way to avoid my question.
 
DEREK
(irritated)
It should be obvious even to someone like
you that whatever helps the largest number
of people is what we should work towards.
Our society's always been based on that.
It's what drives the Draft. Hell, just ask
my dad. He knows all about that.

Tom grins savagely.

TOM
I'd be most happy to if he weren't so
conveniently dead. Funny how he managed to
avoid all the problems he helped create.

Derek drains the last of his drink. He raises a feeble objection when Tom fills it again to the brim. His brother-in-law ignores him and tilts back the kitchen chair on which he sits.

TOM (cont'd.)
Unfortunately, you're right. At least
you're correct in one sense.
 
DEREK
Okay. I'll bite. What sense is that?
 

With a heavy thump, Tom drops his chair down on all fours.

 
TOM
Our teachers and parents, the media and the
politicians, all of them extol the virtues
of the "common good," of "sacrifice," of
"altruism." Those are the catch phrases,
the rationale they use to justify
everything they do to us.
 
DEREK
You mean "for us."
 
TOM
I mean what I say. The Draft spreads the
body parts around, propping up whatever
inflated number of lives they claim are
saved from the Virus. All at the mere
sacrifice of a single human being.
According to them, you're no more entitled
to your own body than you are to your own
money. "Society" owns both and is free to
dispose of them as it wills. "The greatest
good for the greatest number." It's sick.

Derek tosses up his hands and laughs incredulously.

DEREK
I hardly know where to begin pointing out
your mistakes! We all pay taxes. We all
benefit from them. Taxes are the price we
pay for civilization. Everyone knows that.
Same with the Draft. We're all subject to
the Draft. We all benefit when more people
survive and go on to lead productive lives.
As for the common good... Now you're
attacking the Constitution! I got to hand
it to you. That's a new one, at least.

Wearily, Tom shakes his head.

TOM
(rhetorically)
How did things get so screwed up?
(ticks points off on his fingers)
First of all, if you're poor enough, you
don't pay taxes. The government pays you.
In any event, hiring the government to
steal from Peter to pay Paul doesn't alter
the fact that taking somebody's money
without his permission is theft. Second, if
you're sick enough or are a woman with
enough young kids or pump enough wealth
into the economy or are over thirty, you're
exempt from the Draft.
 
DEREK
(indignantly)
What's so bad about that? It's no different
than when they drafted people for wars.
We're just engaged in a different kind of
war now, is all. The same principle applies.
 
TOM
(nods)
Again you're right...in a perverse sort of
way. It is the same principle...the same
wrong principle. Society doesn't own you
any more than it owns your wealth. Taking
money is robbery. Taking your life is murder.

Derek slams a fist against the table. The almost empty scotch bottle dances a short jig across the wooden table top.

DEREK
We have an obligation -- a duty -- to
society. Think of all we receive from our
culture. All the wealth, all the knowledge
we've inherited from our ancestors. It's a
debt we can never really repay. When our
culture -- our society -- needs us, how can
we refuse to surrender what we wouldn't
even have in the first place if it weren't
for that society you detest so much?
 
TOM
But each of those advances, all that wealth
comes from the ideas and efforts of
individual people.
 
DEREK
Who could not even exist -- let alone
create those wonders of civilization --
without the assistance of other people and
the social structure we use.

Glaring, Tom downs a third of his glass.

TOM
But there's literally no such thing as "society."

Derek waves dismissively at his brother-in-law.

 
DEREK
Now you're being ridiculous. Of course
society exists. We're immersed in it. We're
part of it. It's part of us. We couldn't
live without society.

Tom leans forward and extends his bare arms across the table, his wrists held together, his fingers flaring as he seeks to make his point.

TOM
(almost pleading)
Yes, O.K., it exists as an idea, as a
description of the relationships among
individuals. But it doesn't exist
independently above and beyond the people
who comprise it. Groups don't think or feel
or live in any literal sense. Only people
do. Individuals are who we need to
consider. Not groups.

Derek grunts his opinion of that position.

DEREK
Ever heard of something being greater than
the sum of its parts? Surely that
description fits society quite well?
 
TOM
All that means is that people can
accomplish more together than they can
separately. That doesn't alter the fact
that the individual is primary. Just like
the concepts of left and right. They
describe relationships between a person and
other things. Yet that relationship is
secondary to -- because it depends on --
the individual. Without the single person,
right and left have no meaning. You can't
create different rules for society while
ignoring what's proper for the individual.
That's just as wrong as it would be to use
algebra while denying the existence or
validity of the arithmetic it depends on.

Exasperated, Derek scrubs at his face.

DEREK
You're spouting nonsense. You act as though
society is a myth.
 
TOM
In the sense you and everyone else uses it,
yes, damn it, society is a myth. And a
destructive one at that. Society has no
values of its own, no free will, no life.
You use metaphors to describe it then
confuse the metaphor with the reality.
Properly understood, society -- that is,
cooperative relationships among individuals
-- it's a glorious idea, a celebration of
what we can accomplish together, pursuing
common goals, sharing our skills, our
knowledge, but all as individuals. The
result can be wondrous.
 
But used as you mean it, society is a grim
and terrible master, a destroyer of
individual hopes and aspirations, a
shredder of lives and happiness. The
"common good" of the Constitution you
mention respects the proper hierarchy. It
recognizes that the common good or the
greatest good for the greatest number can
only exist, can only mean the greatest good
as judged by the individual persons
themselves. Taking the common good to mean
the faceless, soulless standard of your
type of society only benefits one group by
tyrannizing, terrorizing, and plundering another.

Unsteadily Tom shoves back his chair. The legs scrape preternaturally loudly across the tile in the late night quiet. Weaving, he stands and points a finger at Derek's chest.

TOM (cont'd.)
I, for one, refuse to sacrifice myself and
my values for strangers who have no
legitimate claim on any aspect of my life.
I'm not the only one, either. We intend to
do something about this travesty. All we
ask is all anyone has the right to ask of
us: to be left alone to live our lives as
we choose -- as I choose -- free from
threats and force. I came here this weekend
hoping maybe -- just maybe -- you might be
willing to join us. Or at least to help.
Before it's too late.

Derek stumbles to his feet. His fists curl into hard balls at his sides as he casts about for some appropriate response. When at last he speaks, his words come short and to the point.

DEREK
Go to hell.

 

12. INT. LIVING ROOM -- DAY

Moaning softly, Derek weaves his way downstairs. Marlene is cleaning up. An apprehensive expression flickers beneath a surface calm.

MARLENE
Have you seen Tom?
 
DEREK
(winces)
He's not in his room?

Marlene shakes her head.

MARLENE
His bags are gone. So's his car.

Miserably, Derek sinks onto the bottom stair. He does not meet his wife's gaze

DEREK
Shit...

 

13. INT. DRAFT COMMISSION OFFICE 1026 -- DAY

The Draft Commission Office reception room is nothing more than a utilitarian room filled with plastic chairs. Are all filled. Most o the new Draftees are men. A few are women. No one meets the eyes of the others.

CAPTAIN GEORGE PARKER, 52, stands at the front of the room examining the new Draftees.

PARKER
I'd like to welcome you all here today.

His gaze drifts across the faces of the subdued crowd but does not linger on anyone.

PARKER (cont'd.)
I realize the heavy burden you bring with
you. I sincerely want you to know we're
here to help. First, we'll process your
paperwork, then we'll perform your final
physicals prior to formal induction into
the Donor Corps. After that, anyone so
desiring may visit one-on-one -- for as
long as you need to -- with one of our
Draft counselors. He or she will be able to
answer any and all of your questions and
ease you through this difficult transition period.

The captain nods to a noncom standing discretely in the background near the door to the exam rooms.

Derek's gaze follows the SERGEANT, 36, who steps smartly forward.

SERGEANT
Good day, gentlemen. And ladies.
(holds up a thick sheaf of papers)
These forms need to be completed by you
before we proceed to the next stage of
operations. In here you will find...

The sound of the sergeant's bass voice drones on. Casually Derek observes the "honor guard" stationed by pairs at each doorway. Though the burly soldiers wear no helmets, they sport the hard look of veteran combat soldiers. The dark-metal, laser weapons leaning on their right shoulders appear to be anything other than ceremonial.

SERGEANT (O.S.)
Derek Hendersen.

As the sergeant calls his name, Derek shoves aside the implications of those weapons and advances to the front of the room to accept his forms. A quick scan of his fellow Draftees reveals that his group consists of at least three dozen men and half a dozen women, ranging in age from twenty to fifty, the current upper limit.

No one makes eye contact.

 

14. INT. EXAM ROOM -- DAY

Derek hands his forms to an elderly doctor. He endures a half-hour physical, probed and prodded and stabbed. At the end, the doctor perfunctorily stamps "Approved" across the front of Derek's forms and hands them back to the new Draftee.

 

15. INT. HALLWAY -- DAY

Derek sits in an austere hallway painted an innocuous beige that does little to stimulate his senses. His eyes droop.

A young CORPORAL, 26, enters the hallway through a door labeled "Draft Counselor." The soldier glances at a sheet on a clipboard and barks a name in a bored tone.

CORPORAL
Hendersen!

Startled, Derek rises stiffly from his plastic chair shoved against a wall. Stifling a yawn, he follows the soldier's pointing finger.

 

16. INT. COUNSELOR'S OFFICE -- DAY

The counselor's office proves more luxurious. A smiling, gray-haired man, MAJOR KARL WEATHERBY, 60, stands from behind his desk and extends a hand which Derek shakes. Settling into the indicated leather-upholstered chair, Derek glances discretely at the name plate perched on the edge of the mahogany desk.

WEATHERBY
(steeples his fingers)
So, Derek.
(smiles solicitously)
How may I be of assistance?

Wetting his lips, Derek essays a flickering smile.

DEREK
As you can imagine, all this comes as a bit
of a surprise to me. A shock, really.

The major's white brows arch like twin caterpillars. He sounds genuinely puzzled.

WEATHERBY
How so?

Awkwardly, Derek waves a hand.

DEREK
My age. Just five years to go to the limit.
My business. I employ twenty people, you
know. I thought maybe we could discuss the
exemption I applied for. I never did hear whether --

Major Weatherby lowers his hands to the desktop.

WEATHERBY
Your application for a business exemption
was reviewed by qualified personnel when
your randomly assigned Draft number
appeared on the current assignment roster.
 
DEREK
And...?

The counselor spreads his leathery hands apart.

WEATHERBY
And it was denied, of course.

Derek blinks his confusion.

DEREK
But... Why?
 
WEATHERBY
Come, come, Mr. Hendersen.
(smiles broadly)
Surely you don't think you would be here
now if we had granted your request?

Derek shrugs.

DEREK
Well... Mistakes happen, you know, and I
just wondered if maybe --
 
WEATHERBY
No. No mistake here.
(hesitates then leans on his arms)
We examined your operations quite
thoroughly. Cube production is a high
priority, I assure you.
 
DEREK
Then why was --
 
WEATHERBY
We'd like to thank you for the superlative
job you did of renovating and modernizing
that factory. Indeed, you've created such a
magnificent social asset that we all stand
in awe of your achievement. Because of that
outstanding work, we believe your factory
has, as the experts say, matured to the
point where it can continue to function
without your constant attention. Your
supervisors and lower level managers have
demonstrated quite nicely their ability in
operating the facility on a day-to-day
basis without your guiding hand.
 
DEREK
But I created that business. I risked all
my money. I --
 
WEATHERBY
Surely, you aren't appealing to selfish
interests, are you, Mr. Hendersen?
 
DEREK
But my family. My wife...
 
WEATHERBY
Will still inherit your share. Your wife
is, of course, free to sell to certain
other, interested parties should she choose
to do so. After all...
(glances down at a folder opened on his desk)
...Marlene will probably have little desire
to become mired in the messy affairs of a
thriving business. Better for her to turn
over the reins to more experienced hands .
and invest her funds elsewhere in a more
passive fashion. After the government, of
course, has distributed the excess
profits from the sale.
 
DEREK
"Other parties"?
(frowns)
How do you know who might be interest --
 
WEATHERBY
(brusquely)
Any other questions?
(glances at this watch)
 
DEREK
I'm not sure. I --
 
WEATHERBY
You're aware, of course, that you have
sixty days to conclude your affairs before
you report to Donor Processing. You may
also be aware that if you sell any business
assets before that time, you can avoid
inheritance taxes.
(winks)
That'd be a nice bonus to leave your
family, wouldn't it? I'm sure you will be
contacted soon by potential buyers.
(grins)
You know how news travels.
 
DEREK
But I --
 
WEATHERBY
Please. Let's not become hostile.

Abruptly Major Weatherby stands and extends a hand.

Automatically, Derek follows suit.

The corporal who had shown him in mysteriously opens the door and hustles him out.

WEATHERBY (cont'd.)
If you have any other concerns, Mr.
Hendersen, be sure to let me know.

 

17. INT. FAMILY ROOM -- NIGHT

Younger versions of Derek and Marlene sit in their family room. Derek sits at a desk while Marlene watches television on a flat screen covering one wall.

MARLENE
Omigod. Look at that...

Mildly annoyed, Derek glances up from the first-year financial figures for his new cube manufacturing business. Sighing, he squints at the screen.

DEREK
What...?

His eyes widen as he recognizes the larger-than-life image of his wife's brother, Tom, occupying the left side of the screen. Quickly, he joins Marlene on the couch. The grim-faced ANNOUNCER filling the right side of the picture stares out at his unseen audience. His sonorous tones reverberate through the air.

ANNOUNCER
The leader of the anti-Draft movement has
been identified as one Thomas Pendleton,
formerly a student at Eastern State
University and currently on the run from
local and federal officials for bombing
four Draft Commission Buildings in the
South and East. Pendleton, originally from
Primbroke, New York, issued a video
announcement this morning claiming credit
for the latest bombing that rocked the
quiet suburban community of Eastlake, Georgia.

Tom's frozen visage expands to fill the entire screen then melts into life.

TOM
The Committee to End the Draft and Restore
Our Freedoms has struck again today at the
heart of the corruption destroying the
fabric of our society. CEDROF pledges to
continue its assault against a government
that treats its citizens as cattle to be
slaughtered and dismembered. The
abomination of committing these atrocities
in the name of "the greatest good for the
greatest number" must be opposed at every
turn. To that end, I and my followers
pledge our lives, our fortunes, and our
sacred honors. We will continue our efforts
until the Draft is abolished and our
freedoms are once again established
throughout this country.

Though Tom obviously continues to speak, the words are muted as his face shrinks and dissolves into images of charred ruins, rioting citizens dashing across darkened streets, and determined looking police and military units marching in heavily armed groups in front of savagely burning buildings.

ANNOUNCER (O.S.)
The extremist group known as CEDROF joins
other fanatical and extremist anti-
government organizations which have delayed
timely food deliveries, disrupted
transportation, and led to a general
increase in violent crime in many of our
major cities. The recent power outage along
the Eastern seaboard has been attributed to
sabotage by these suspected outlaws. The
President is expected to invoke his
emergency powers to deal harshly with what
he calls "threats to the very foundation of
our free and democratic society."
 
Speculations suggest that this radical
increase in opposition to the Draft
coincides with the recent increase in the
age of eligibility to thirty-five. This
change, which was passed by Congress during
its spring session, is scheduled to take
effect on July first.
 
In other news...

Slowly Derek pads down the sound. Turning to Marlene, he shivers. For a long moment, the spouses search each others' eyes.

MARLENE
Do you think they'll connect him with us?

With anger submerging the fear bubbling within him, Derek frowns.

DEREK
(shakes his head)
I don't know. But if he ever shows his face
around here, he'll wish he hadn't. I never
want to see him again. I don't need him
making my life any more complicated than it
already is. It's tough enough setting up a
new business without...

Marlene says nothing but merely returns her attention to the television.

 

18. INT. BANK OFFICE -- DAY

Derek sits rigidly at a long, polished table as legal documents pass around the people gathered there. The bank's board room holds him, his lawyer, WALLACE CRANDALL, 51, the VICE-PRESIDENT, 55, who had handled the financing of this deal, the LAWYER, 48, for the purchaser...and that new owner of the cube manufacturing business -- the business he had rescued from oblivion and built into a solid concern -- Stan Newson.

CRANDALL
Mr. Hendersen?

Crandall clears his throat and offers his client a pen for the signing. He looks embarrassed.

Stan Newson, on the other hand, beams a broad smile as he lounges in the chair across the table from the Draftee.

Snatching the black-barreled pen from Crandall's manicured fingers, Derek holds it like a dagger he could plunge into the fat belly of the man whose amused expression tells Derek all he needs to know. Seconds passed. An uncomfortable silence balloons around them, yet Newson acts unaware of anything untoward.

Swallowing the bile in his throat, Derek finally uncurls his fingers and shifts his grip on the pen. Barely looking down, he scrawls his name in all the spaces his lawyer indicates. When the last signature had been affixed, he clicks the pen closed.

The two lawyers gather together the papers.

NEWSON
Glad to do business with you, Derek. I --

Without a word, Derek stands and tosses the pen like a spear. His target, Newson, does not flinch as the projectile strikes his broad chest and falls impotently to the polished wood of the table. Knocking over his chair, Derek storms from the room and into the hallway.

 

19. EXT. PARKING LOT -- DAY

Seconds later, Derek is outside and heading for his car. Wispy clouds brushes across the penetrating blue of the afternoon sky.

Unlocking his car, Derek clambers in, starts the motor, and speeds away without a backward glance. Racing down the street, he roars towards home. The possibility of a ticket does not concern him in the least.

 

20. INT. BEDROOM -- NIGHT

Derek and Marlene are making love, fiercely and frenetically. When at last they separate, sweating and panting, he draws her closer and holds her tight. For a time, his wife tries to hold in the tears. At his comforting words, however, the tears finally flow in great sobbing torrents. He soothes her upset as best he can.

After Marlene drifts into an exhausted slumber, Derek extricates himself, slips on a robe, and heads downstairs.

 

21. INT.OFFICE -- NIGHT

Derek pads into his office and eases shut the solid-core door. For a long moment, he stands with his back pressed against that reassuring solidity. He pauses uncertainly for a moment and then hurries to his computer.

Turning on a desk lamp, he flips on the monitor and accesses the net. With an ease that would surprise his wife, he zeroes in on the site he wants. Anxiously, he scans the information that not even the government has yet been able to eradicate: an anonymously maintained Draft resister site.

After reading the postings and discussions and announcements, Derek enters a privacy room. He hesitates. Though he knows well enough how to utilize the net, he has no great assurance that "secure" rooms truly are.

DEREK
I hope this really is secure...

Slowly he closes his eyes. With great deliberation, he types in the message that had gradually coalesced in his brain.

MESSAGE
I will soon be processed as a Donor. I
don't know if there is anything you can do
to help me, but I am desperate. My wife is
pregnant, at least. By the time our new
child is born and in school, Marlene will
be beyond Draft age. And she's well-provided for financially.
 
But I don't want to die. I can't totally
accept all of your positions, not yet,
but...I don't want my body parts scattered
among dozens of unknown recipients. That is
not the kind of immortality I want.
 
I can't run. Without a Donor card, I can't
buy food, rent an apartment, or work. And I
don't know how to obtain a counterfeit card.
 
All my life, I've followed the rules, done
my duty, been as good a citizen as I could
be. All that's done is led me here.
 
So if you can do ANYTHING to help me,
please, please contact me here. If it means
anything, my brother-in-law is TOM
PENDLETON. Thanks.

As soon as he finishes, he exits the net and closes down his machine. For a silent space of time, he sits in the chill gloom, clasping his trembling hands on his lap.

 

22. EXT. PARKING LOT, DRAFT COMMISSION OFFICE 1026 -- DAY

In five rows of seven men each, the latest group of Draftees stands in the parking lot of Draft Commission Office #1026. To one side, Captain Parker watches them, pride in his expression. The crisp cotton uniforms of green and white give the men a disciplined air. Silver pins commemorating their sacrifice glitter on their chests in the early morning light. An honor guard flanks them as row by row they enter the comfortable, air-conditioned bus that will transport them to the Donor Processing Center.

Numbly, Derek stares at the graying hair of the slump-shouldered man just before him in line. Blank thoughts and anesthetized emotions allow nothing of his true feelings to show on his face.

A stream of images plays across his mind: the oddly formal farewells with his wife and children that morning; the cab ride that had brought him to the Draft Office; the discarding of his street clothes and the last shreds of his individual identity; the final breakfast that had gone untouched by nearly all of the Draftees; the rousingly delivered speech presented by Captain Parker reiterating the great good they would accomplish that day; the lack of applause which had done nothing to diminish the captain's bracing demeanor and hearty handshakes; the pin ceremony; and finally this stepping onto the bus, gliding soundlessly from sunlight and fresh breezes into well-modulated gloom and canned air.

 

23. INT. BUS -- DAY

Wearily, Derek slides into a window seat near the back of the bus. The luxurious cushion and back support eases around his body with a caress like a mother cradling her infant. He pays no attention to the young man who takes the aisle seat. Mellow music wafts from concealed speakers. Short minutes pass. Derek barely notices the whoosh of the closing door and the strong, smooth acceleration of the bus.

At a steady forty-miles-per-hour, the transport pulls into the light morning traffic. Block after block of run-down buildings, trash-littered gutters, and abandoned, rusting automobiles blur past. The unsmiling faces of commuting drivers pace them until divergent destinations peel the citizens away from the green-and-white painted bus. After awhile, Derek leans back his head and closes his eyes against the scenery he would soon enjoy no more.

Short snatches of voices swirl chaotically through his mind. Conflicting messages of "sacrifice and duty," "selfishness versus selflessness," "the greatest good for the greatest number," "freedom and individualism" war against each other on the interior battlefield of his brain.

As the bus pulls into the parking lot of Mercy Hospital, Derek searches the landscape with the wild hope that his rescuers will appear at the last possible moment. Unfortunately, he sees nothing out of the ordinary.

With imperceptible deceleration, the bus comes to a stop near the entrance to the Donor Processing Center.

A soothing voice issues from the bus's speakers.

VOICE
You will be bivouacked here until your
final medical evaluation can be performed.
Some of you will be processed immediately
for urgent Virus cases needing new organs.
The rest of you will be housed for periods
ranging from days to weeks until the best
matches can be made between you and
appropriate Donor recipients. Few of you,
however, will be forced to wait longer than
a month before being called into the final
service of your country and your fellow citizens.

As Derek shuffles down the bus aisle, a faint trembling wells upward from some deep inner source and sets his arms, legs, and hands to shaking like leaves in the faintest of winds. Going down the four steps of the bus, he has to grasp the railing for support.

 

24. EXT. RECEIVING AREA, DONOR PROCESSING CENTER -- DAY

Squinting into the painfully bright daylight, Derek pauses for a moment and surveys the scene. Another honor guard lines the green-carpeted path the Draftees follow towards the entrance of the Processing Center. No one here smiles. As each Draftee comes to the open doorway, a PRIVATE checks each individual's Donor card and matches it against a master print-out.

A gentle hand presses against Derek's back, urging him forward. Stumbling forward, he swivels his head and catches the empathetic gaze of the man behind him. With a deep, shuddering breath, Derek resumes his slow march down the carpet. The narrowed gaze of an honor guard tracks his progress towards the hospital.

With each step, Derek starts to shed his lethargy. Casting about with his eyes, he scans every sheltered nook or elevation where a marauding band of Draft resisters might be lurking, ready any instant to make their deadly assault against the governmental forces arrayed before them.

But as each Draftee holds out his Donor card for inspection, Derek's eager expression stutters to a halt. He scans the faces of his fellow Donors and knows his hope is a forlorn one. These are beaten men, fatalistically, obediently, dutifully and dully accepting the fate their leaders have decreed for them.

Sweat stings Derek's eyes. He blinks and rubs at them. Only eight men stand ahead of him in the line. His Donor card swings from its silver chain around his neck, seeming to choke the breath from his lungs as he creeps nearer and nearer to his goal.

An image seers itself into his mind: his eyes, skin, liver, heart, pancreas, lungs, kidneys, bones, nerves, and parts of his brain being excised and scattered to the far corners of the country.

For the first time, he notices the sign posted above the doorway with its message emblazoned in large letters: The Greatest Good For the Greatest Number.

The words of his brother-in-law reverberate through Derek's clouded thoughts: "freedom," "live for yourself," "your life and your values," "for your families and friends, not for strangers."

Four men separate Derek from his fate.

DEREK
(mumbling to himself)
Maybe I am selfish. Maybe I'm damned to be
a sinner and undeserving of social respect.
Perhaps I always thought Tom was right. Why
else didn't I report him to the
authorities? Criminals have been sentenced
to surrender their organs for less
serious offenses than treason.

The line in front of Derek shrinks to two.

DEREK (cont'd.)
(a shade more loudly)
Maybe the greatest good for me...is me. My
life. My choices. My values. Perhaps I am
unworthy of the honor society's bestowed
upon me by selecting me as a Donor.

Derek's step falters as he stops. The Draftee behind him bumps into him and grumbles something that sounds like an irritated insult. The young private at the door frowns a thin-lipped disapproval and motions the recalcitrant Draftee forward. A weary condescension wreathes his face at this all-too-familiar burble.

PRIVATE
Come on, Draftee. We haven't got all day.

Derek's muscles lock at the words of the round-cheeked corporal. For a brief moment, he squeezes his eyes against the world that is closing in around him.

PRIVATE (cont'd., O.S.)
(harshly)
Come on. Move it!

Inhaling a long breath, Derek nods once, lifts his lids, and takes a step...

...sharply to the left.

Like a string-tethered marionette, he walks woodenly away from the diminished line of Draftees. Unintelligible voices echo incoherently around him. Though the words launched at him do not penetrate his suddenly hardened focus, their emotional content stings like agitated bees. Surprise in those voices flows into alarm which melts into anger and outrage.

With each step farther from the Donor Processing Center, Derek feels his movements ease, his pace quicken, his stiffness loosen. A concentrated and increasing happiness sweeps across his face.

Grinning at last, he begins to run.

The honor guard is well-trained. With precision born of practice, each soldier snaps his laser rifle to his shoulder and centers the targeting light on the back of the skull turned towards them. Silent nods among them grant the shot to the man most directly in line with the target subject.

The faintly visible beam bores through wisps of dust in the air and into the brown hair waving in the wind. The lance of light sears through hair and skin and bone and brain and exits the forehead of the fleeing malcontent.

The remaining Draftees stare, stunned, at the drama unfolding so closely by them. But none bolts, none yells, none resists as the private hurries them into the processing center.

Minutes later, a Donor Preparation Team emerges from the same doorway pushing a cart loaded with monitors and equipment. As they deftly roll the dead Draftee into their refrigerated cart, Derek's eyes are opened wide.

And waiting.

 

THE END

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