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Notes for the Writer...
Some Thoughts on 
Time and Place

If a tree falls in a forest and no one hears it, is there any sound?  If a scene occurs in a vacuum, in a great nebulous nowhere, is there any life to it? 

As a writer, I don’t know about the tree--when I was a child the question often led to long, circular tedious speculations about the vague abstraction of some tree possibly falling somewhere sometime.  My brother and I would plot ways to test our various notions on the topic.  But the problem defies testing by its very nature.  

As a writer, though, I do know about scenes.  And I know this:  A scene that has no specific time or place is dead.  Dead as a doornail. And this notion can be tested.  Just watch an audience shuffle their programs and rattle their candy wrappers in a theatre where actors are in no particular place, just sometime somewhere, illuminated by a pin spot.  Or watch a development executive read a screenplay where the locations are so generically described that he or she can’t visualize the script as a movie and is provoked only to yawn.  Or watch a reader flip back and forth in a book to try to figure out where the characters are or what the context is.  

The audience for a play, movie, or fiction wants to care.  And they can’t care about vagueness.  Or half-baked locales.  Or inconsistent time.  Or inaccuracies.  

The audience--whether viewers at a theatre or movie house, or producers, or editors, or readers--wants to feel as if the writer knows and is in control of the subject, wants to feel as if the writer is driving the train and driving it well.  Otherwise, they’ll hop off instead of going along for the whole ride.  There is a paradox in writing: When you are specific, the work more easily goes to the realm of the universal.  But when you are general or generic, the work doesn’t really go anywhere.  The writer needs to know where the scene is taking place, what time period or era it is, what time of day it is, what the place looks like.  Even if your audience has never been to a cornfield in Iowa or a Chinese restaurant in Monterey Park and won’t know if your description is false or not, and even if the scene is very brief, YOU should know the locale like the back of your hand.  Use your specific knowledge when writing the scene.  Make sure the scene is true to its place and time.  --Paula Cizmar, THE ILLUMINATED MANUSCRIPT

Fuel 
Quotes on Writing Well

From Annie Dillard, A WRITING LIFE, 1989:
When you write, you lay out a line of words...The line of words is a hammer.  You hammer against the walls of your house.  You tap the walls, lightly, everywhere. After giving many years' attention to these things, you know what to listen for.  Some of the walls are bearing walls; they have to stay or everything will fall down.  Other walls can go with impunity; you can hear the difference.  Unfortunately, it is often a bearing wall that has to go.  It cannot be helped.  There is only one solution, which appalls you, but there it is.  Knock it out.  Duck.

From E.M. Forster, ASPECTS OF THE NOVEL, 1927: Neanderthal man listened to stories, if one may judge by the shape of his skull.  The primitive audience was an audience of shock-heads, gaping round the campfire, fatigued with contending against the mammoth or woolly rhinoceros, and only kept awake by suspense.  What would happen next?  The novelist droned on, and as soon as the audience guessed what happened next, they either fell asleep or killed him.  We can estimate the dangers incurred when we think of the career of Scheherazade in somewhat later times.  Scheherazade avoided her fate because she knew how to wield the weapon of suspense--the only literary tool that has any effect upon tyrants and savages.

Reading for Writers

ˇ      WEN FU:  THE ART OF WRITING.  Lu Chi.  (Translated by Sam Hamill)

  (This book is a classic text, almost 2000 years old, on writing; it is wise, concise, and inspirational; unfortunately, it is also out of print; however, it often can be found through Barnes & Noble.com or Amazon.com used booksellers.)   

ˇ      ONE WRITER’S BEGINNINGS.  Eudora Welty.

ˇ      POETICS.  Aristotle.

ˇ      THE WRITING LIFE.  Annie Dillard.

ˇ      AN ANATOMY OF DRAMA.  Martin Esslin.

ˇ      ON BECOMING A NOVELIST.  John Gardner.

ˇ      THE HERO WITH A THOUSAND FACES.  Joseph Campbell.

ˇ      LETTERS TO A YOUNG POET.  Rainer Maria Rilke

Also take a look at:  ASPECTS OF THE NOVEL by  E.M. Forster  and WRITING IN RESTAURANTS by David Mamet.

 

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