Notes for the Writer... Some Thoughts on Time and Place
If a tree
falls in a forest and no one hears it, is there any sound? If a scene occurs
in a vacuum, in a
great nebulous nowhere, is there any life to it? As a writer, I don’t know about
the tree--when I was a child the question often led to long, circular tedious
speculations about the vague abstraction of some tree possibly falling
somewhere sometime. My brother and
I would plot ways to test our various notions on the topic. But the problem defies
testing by its
very nature. As a writer, though,
I do know about scenes.
And I know
this: A scene that has no specific
time or place is dead.
Dead as a
doornail. And this notion can be tested.
Just watch an audience shuffle their programs and
rattle their candy
wrappers in a theatre where actors are in no particular place, just sometime
somewhere, illuminated by a pin spot.
Or watch a development executive read a screenplay
where the locations
are so generically described that he or she can’t visualize the script as a
movie and is provoked only to yawn.
Or watch a reader flip back and forth in a book
to try to figure out
where the characters are or what the context is. The audience for a play, movie, or fiction wants to
care. And they can’t care about
vagueness. Or half-baked
locales. Or inconsistent
time. Or inaccuracies. The audience--whether
viewers at a
theatre or movie house, or producers, or editors, or readers--wants to feel as
if the writer knows and is in control of the subject, wants to feel as if the
writer is driving the train and driving it well. Otherwise, they’ll hop off instead of going along for the
whole ride. There is a paradox in
writing: When you are specific, the work more easily goes to the realm of the
universal. But when you are
general or generic, the work doesn’t really go anywhere. The writer needs
to know where the
scene is taking place, what time period or era it is, what time of day it is,
what the place looks like.
Even if
your audience has never been to a cornfield in Iowa or a Chinese restaurant in
Monterey Park and won’t know if your description is false or not, and even if
the scene is very brief, YOU should know the locale like the back of your
hand. Use your specific knowledge
when writing the scene.
Make sure
the scene is true to its place and time. --Paula Cizmar, THE ILLUMINATED MANUSCRIPT
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Fuel Quotes on Writing Well
From Annie Dillard, A
WRITING LIFE, 1989: When you write, you lay out a line of words...The line of
words is a hammer. You hammer
against the walls of your house.
You tap the walls, lightly, everywhere. After giving many years'
attention to these things, you know what to listen for. Some of the walls are bearing
walls;
they have to stay or everything will fall down. Other walls can go with impunity; you can hear the
difference. Unfortunately, it is
often a bearing wall that has to go.
It cannot be helped. There
is only one solution, which appalls you, but there it is. Knock it out. Duck. From E.M. Forster, ASPECTS OF THE NOVEL, 1927: Neanderthal
man listened
to stories, if one may judge by the shape of his skull. The primitive audience was
an audience
of shock-heads, gaping round the campfire, fatigued with contending against the
mammoth or woolly rhinoceros, and only kept awake by suspense. What would happen next? The novelist droned on, and as soon as
the audience guessed what happened next, they either fell asleep or killed him. We
can estimate the dangers incurred
when we think of the career of Scheherazade in somewhat later times. Scheherazade
avoided her fate because
she knew how to wield the weapon of suspense--the only literary tool that has
any effect upon tyrants and savages.
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Reading for Writers ˇ
WEN FU: THE ART OF WRITING. Lu Chi. (Translated by Sam Hamill) (This book is a classic text, almost 2000 years old, on writing;
it is wise, concise, and inspirational; unfortunately, it is also out of
print; however, it often can be found through Barnes
& Noble.com or Amazon.com used
booksellers.) ˇ
ONE WRITER’S
BEGINNINGS. Eudora Welty. ˇ
POETICS. Aristotle. ˇ
THE WRITING
LIFE. Annie Dillard. ˇ
AN ANATOMY OF
DRAMA. Martin Esslin. ˇ
ON BECOMING A
NOVELIST. John Gardner. ˇ
THE HERO WITH
A THOUSAND FACES.
Joseph Campbell. ˇ
LETTERS TO A
YOUNG POET. Rainer Maria Rilke Also take a
look at: ASPECTS OF THE NOVEL by E.M. Forster and WRITING IN RESTAURANTS by David Mamet.
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