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BATTLE TURF     Written by Kimball Vance   Posted April 29, 2007
 
Logline:   Big City cop fights crooks & criminals, but becomes sucked into high level political corruption. He becomes a marked man for what he knows, hunted by crooked cops and gang members alike.
 
A blend of Lethal Weapon, Pulp Fiction and Hollywood Confidential
 
 
 
 
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G.I. JOE: A REAL AMERICAN HERO! THE TERROR WITHIN   
 
Written by:  Benjamin Cook & Horace Cook     Posted June 1, 2006
 
Logline:  General James L. Flagg is tasked by the United Nations in forming the world's first international anti-terrorist unit to face off against the most dangerous faction known to man...Cobra.
 
Synopsis:   Dark days have fallen over our nation and world as terrorism makes headlines in our newspapers and television broadcast. We as a global community are vigilant in pursuing those who attempt to strike and undermind our societies. Unfortunately, a new terrorist organization has come to the surface. This new threat is far more deadly then any faction known, and not much information is available. Many intelligence operatives have attempted to gain access into this secret group, but have met with dire consequences. The only data successfully extracted is the nameCOBRA. This force is rumored to have highly influential individuals contributing to its financial and personnel ranks. It is even believed that Cobra troops are operating throughout the world and leading double lives without their families knowledge of their sinister union.
 
The President of the United States has tasked the Secretaries of Defense and Homeland Security with finding a way to counter and ultimately cease this threat. In conjunction with the United Nations, the decision was made to assign Brigadier General JAMES L. FLAGG with developing, implementing, and commanding an elite unit that will oppose the forces of Cobra. This unit is codename: G.I. JOE!
 
 
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Allegiance (A/A/Period)  Written by J.R. Bourgeois
 
Log line:   Joseph Broussard becomes the heroic leader of a group
of Acadians who will form the core of the underground
resistance against British expansion during the French
and Indian War.
 
 
Synopsis:   In 1702, Joseph Broussard (a.k.a. Beausoleil) is born
in French controlled Acadia.  By the time he reaches
young adulthood, the British control his homeland.  At
13, he witnesses a dramatic event that will forever
change his life and greatly influence what he will
become.
 
The mid 18th century sees new conflicts arise between
the French and the British.  In 1755, Governor Charles
Lawrence gives the order to deport approximately 8,000
Acadians from their homeland in Nova Scotia.  The
governors of the Thirteen colonies, especially William
Shirley of Massachusetts, are seen as accomplices.
 
Not all Acadians take their lot passively.  After he
escapes from a New England prison, Beausoleil becomes
the leader of the underground resistance against
British expansion.  For years, Broussard and his
comrades elude the authorities with the help of the
natives who instruct them in guerilla warfare.
 
But with triumph also comes tragedy.  Beausoleil would
lose family members to the continuing New World
conflict.  To top it off, Beausoleil ends up being
double-crossed by one of his own men, leading to his
arrest.
 
Beausoleil is incarcerated at Halifax in July 1763.
He will eventually find his new Acadia.  By the spring
of 1765, Beausoleil is in Louisiana where he will live
out the rest of his life with family and friends.
 
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Bottom Time    Written by:Paul Murdock
 
Log line:  In 1925 the USS S-51 collided with the SS CITY OF ROME off of Block Island, RI, and sank in 132 feet of cold, dark water. The USN appointed LCDR Edward Ellsberg the salvage officer.  The hard hat diving was onerous, most divers got bent repeatedly, as salvage and diving technology was pushed and perfected: American ingenuity is demonstrated at its best.  Courage is the norm -- men tunnel under the S-51, enter dark, tight compartments, many nearly die from the bends and the cold.  After two seasons of diving the S-51 is raised, but due to rough weather it surfaces not when intended, and it must be purposely sunk rather than lost.  The salvors, with inspiring leadership provided by Ellsberg, once again raise her, but near the Brooklyn Bridge, in front of thousands watching from the shore, the S-51 sinks again.
 
Synopsis:   Bottom Time is a true story of incredible courage and determination, about the salvage of the S-51 in 1925-26.  Lieutenant Commander Edward Ellsberg, appointed by the USN as the salvage officer, struggling against the sea, the cold, working with few divers and primitive diving technology, develops a plan to raise the S-51 from its grave at 130 feet.  It involves tunneling under the submarine, rigging pontoons, and dewatering spaces.  Eventually the submarine is nearly ready to be raised, but a sudden storm brings it to the surface too soon, and it must be sunk rather than risk losing it entirely.  Ellsberg's leadership inspires the men to continue, and they raise the sub again. It is towed towards the New York Navy Yard, but near the yard the tow is run aground – the S-51 sinks in front of thousands watching from ashore. The salvors raise the S-51 as thousands watch and cheer.  This story inspires rightful patriotism and pride in demonstrated American ingenuity.
 
The author is a retired USN Officer, with experience in diving and salvage.
 
 
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