Remember the scene where Thelma and Louise are in a convertible hauling ass toward that mammoth cliff and they're being chased by, like, a gazillion Blaring cop cars because Louise, or Thelma - Blam - shot that nutball in the parking lot and -Kablooey- blew up that gas truck and stuff?....
SCREENPLAYS AND T.V. MOVIES
YOU GET: A thorough exam and detailed written critique of: basic premise, dialogue, pacing, structure, format, focus, character, marketability. This includes a hard-copy critique and notes written directly on the script page. One follow-up phone call or e-mail exchange to discuss your concerns.
All this for
(this is a great price...compare with other professional consultants at my level of expertise)
(Scripts over 125 pages, e-mail for quote)
TREATMENTS, OUTLINES for Films
Detailed written analysis and phone or e-mail exchange...negotiable according to length.
FILMS (up to one hour) and ONE
Same areas covered including basic recommendations for writing for t.v.
(For grammar, spelling, word usage, etc.)
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