Aouda's Bad Metaphor or Simile Challenge
 
 

1.

Sleekly malevolent, driven by a violent hunger, Blair glided through the chum-filled waters of the singles bar, oblivious to the remora of Jim's adoring gaze.   Jim hid in the shadows and watched Blair work the dance floor.   The driving beat of the music and the odor of human arousal was leading Jim toward a feeding frenzy of his own.

It would take so little.  But so much.  Jim would have to have the courage to approach the shark that was his desire for Blair.  He would have to admit that he wanted the other man.  Jim would have to admit that he wanted Blair to fuck him.

Could he brave those waters for Blair?

May 14, 2002

2.

His body was hard -- not hard like Milosevic,  the Serbian strongman,  but hard like the marble on your shower floor, when you fall and bang your knee.  Jim Ellison's body had been carved by years of hard work and even harder play.   Muscles were layered over an armature of bone and sinew creating an idol for Blair to worship.

But this statue came down from its pedestal to enfold Blair in arms that were warm flesh instead of
cold stone.

May 15, 2002