Thesis Statement - Examples
Subject: The Best Place for the Perfect Family Vacation
Focused Topic: Yosemite
Three Major Points: recreational activities, pleasant location, economical lodging
Thesis Statement: The best place for the perfect family is Yosemite because of the fun recreational activities, the beautiful scenery in a pleasant location, and the economical lodging available.
Subject: A Memorable Moment
Focused Topic: The Day I Go My Driver's License
Three Major Points: unpleasant surroundings, never ending lines, rude people
Thesis Statement: One moment I'll never forget was the time I spend in the Department of Motor Vehicles facing unpleasant surroundings, never ending lines, and rude people as I tried to get my first driver's license.
Subject: Qualities of a Good Campsite
Focused Topic: Three Important Qualities of a Good Campsite
Three Major Points: recreation, location, convenience
Thesis Statement: If you're looking for the best campsite, there are three important factors to consider: the availability of recreational activities, the attractiveness of the location, and the closeness of basic amenities.
Subject: Sports and Activities
Focused Topic: My Three Favorite Activities
Three Major Points: soccer, biking, roller blading
Thesis Statement: When I have some free time to myself I like to spend it outside playing soccer, riding my bike, or roller blading.
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