Using Description as a Clincher - Examples

Concluding Paragraphs
Introductory Paragraphs

Mile upon mile of brown Pennsylvania hills unfolded as I drove in and out of the curves and over the crests of Interstate 70.  The world's worst forest fire could not have caused more destruction&emdash;and all because of the gypsy moth.  If this pest is to be stopped, it will only be through the strong action of the government and private landowners.


For anyone fortunate enough to have a wood-burning fireplace, sitting in front of a healthy fire on a frosty winter afternoon provides a sense of comfort and luxury.  Unfortunately, many fireplace owners do not understand the three essential steps for achieving a successful fire. Everyone should learn the basics of preparing the fireplace, arranging the materials before igniting, and tending the fire.


Its left ear is partially detached.  One of its black plastic eyes is gone.  Parts of its fur is worn and matted from being hugged and tugged around the house.  Food and juice stains dapple its tan coat in places.  Some people might think this little stuffed bunny should be thrown into the junk heap.  But this old bunny is one of my favorite childhood possessions, and we've been through a lot together.

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