WRITING TO THINK AND LEARN: THE BASICS          Judy Lightfoot

Writing informal papers helps you think and learn; reading them helps me teach to your needs.
Write informally about new material. Besides improving your fluency and other skills, you'll understand and remember material better, clarify your cloudy ideas, and make useful connections. You'll also be making something new from the material, turning what’s "merely academic" into personally significant knowledge. Finally, your papers will track your learning through a course of study, so give each writing a date and a topic or title, and keep papers in order.
        Informal papers tell me what you and the class need from me in order to learn and understand. I read them like a class newsletter and don’t comment much, but I note whether you do them and mark them as good, thoughtful and skillful (+), perfunctory but reasonably skillful (ok), or weak (-).

Writers with a sense of purpose solve most writing problems naturally, in the course of pursuing a larger aim. So make every assignment your own, and make course purposes your own. Don’t just “do a paper.”
Developing a strong, clear purpose can help you write well. Advice and lists of skills can't, because they become a tangle of taboos to novice writers and can feel patronizing or self-evident to the experienced. But the following skills are basic to all writing in my courses. If you need extra coaching or practice in any of them, let me know.

5 BASIC SKILLS FOR HOMEWORK PAPERS AND IN-CLASS WRITINGS:
1. Hold a purpose in mind as you write.
a. The purpose of an informal personal response topic is to let you explore your spontaneous first impressions, opinions, or feelings about a reading or subject in free, open-ended ways.
b. The purpose of a more objective or “academic” topic is to teach you course material by asking you to work with it systematically. In doing so you’ll have feelings and opinions about the material, but your aim here is to comprehend it.

2.  Make accurate, true statements that you can support.
a.  Measure your ideas against your own lived experience* (*which includes reading and thinking as well as overt action).
b.  Add the concessions and qualifiers necessary to make a claim like "life is more educational than school” less sweeping and thus perhaps true. And can you correct the self-evident or circular reasoning in "every individual is different" and "poets shouldn't use too many metaphors”?

3.  Give grounds for your thinking.
a.  Reason (explain, define, consider the merits of the opposite case) thoroughly enough to fulfill your purpose.
b.  Support your reasoning with enough details.
c.  Paraphrase or summarize instead of always quoting verbatim (but carefully: using material out of context can distort meaning or intent).
d.  Give simple citations for passages referenced -- e.g., (p. 253.

4.  Say what you mean. (And cut needless repetition and other deadwood.)

5.  Move coherently from point to point.
a.  Explain how points are connected instead of just putting a quote beside a story or an example beside a claim..
b.  Connect your ideas naturally or logically. Ideas in a list make thoughts seem mechanical, not your own.

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